Caligula's Launderette

Heya, hon. Here is my proper critique, if my handwriting is illegible or you need some clarification of something, please tell me. I really liked this, and the only thing ...

Heya, hon. Here is my proper critique, if there is something you don't understand or my handwriting is illegible, please tell me. Something to add to what Bob said. On ...

Heya, hon. So here is my critique of the first chapter. If you don't understand something and need clarification, or my handwriting is illegible, please tell me. The two things ...

Okay, I know this is kind of retarded (the retarded part being that there is no critique), but I wanted to get this down before I forgot. On Boars I ...

Hello, If you have any questions about the critique or can't read my handwriting, please tell me. I will post general stuff in a post after this, as well. Ta, ...

Hi Jenna, Two things, really quick, because I don't have a lot of time. Quotes can't stand on their own, meaning, they can't be a sentence all to themselves; i.e. ...

This looks very much like the Christian Hymn I'll Fly Away , I would watch out for that, because using another's words without citation is considered plagiarism. My two cents ...

Hello, again, hon. Here is another critique, I hope these are helpful to you. ;) Ta, Cal.

Hey, hon. Here we go again. :D Ta, Cal.

Hey, hon. Here we go again. ;) Ta, Cal.

Hey, hon. Here's my proper crit of this. Ta, Cal.

Hey, hon. Here's another one. :D Ta, Cal.

Hey, hon. You know the drill. Ta, Cal.

Hello, hon. You know the drill. Ta, Cal .

Hello, hon. You know the drill. Ta, Cal.